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#1 2017-12-07 16:36:55

BlisaMarshmellow
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From: The State of Confusion
Registered: 2016-12-14
Posts: 541

DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

So, I joined FanFiction.net, and I'm working on posting most (or possibly all, I'm not sure yet) of my previous fanfics on there. 

Also, yesterday I wrote my fanfic of Leon and Dora's last moments together, and I just published it on there: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12751357/3 … trongheart I hope it's well written.

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#2 2017-12-07 18:49:06

oz
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Registered: 2016-11-20
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

OK need tissues now and its good you can..  Feel the feelings

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#3 2017-12-08 07:45:09

Karth Riverbark
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Registered: 2017-09-15
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

So sad....Your a good writer and role player


My spoofs:Atvi...and Alts=
Ewan Benjamin Delaney Tanner Mosswell Jahveri- LP Hare Fighter/Private and Residential Redwall Abbey Hare
Dearil-Archer/Fighter/Assassin in Blackrose

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#4 2017-12-09 12:27:51

BlisaMarshmellow
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Posts: 541

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Oh, thanks!  I'm glad that it's good.  Well, well written.  It's supposed to be sad tongue And thanks; I enjoy writing smile

I'm also hoping to add more chapters to that thing, so, if I can figure it out, this might become a later chapter than chapter 3.  I'll edit this post when/if that happens.

FEEL ALL DA FEELS, MAN sad

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#5 2017-12-09 12:34:13

oz
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Like more of trying to find Leon before find him?   Hmmms....you can mention Patch more if like...think you can tell his personify from role plays and he loves candy chestnuts..

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#6 2017-12-09 12:36:45

BlisaMarshmellow
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From: The State of Confusion
Registered: 2016-12-14
Posts: 541

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Oh no, I mean more of D.R.'s life and diary entries.  To fill in the gaps for readers since I'm not linking back to the MUCK on fanfiction.net.  No, that's the only post of D.R. actually looking for Leon that I'm gonna do.  Sorry for being confusing sad

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#7 2017-12-09 12:53:17

oz
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Oh...cool...so your maybe have storm feather or writing what happen ect.....cool as for last moments maybe as its...own little 1 chapter thing?

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#8 2017-12-09 14:27:48

BlisaMarshmellow
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#9 2017-12-13 10:14:05

The_Brony_Marek
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Registered: 2016-11-20
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Its well written. I also have a fanfiction account, just not done much on it  lately

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#10 2017-12-21 15:04:10

BlisaMarshmellow
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Registered: 2016-12-14
Posts: 541

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Oh, thanks, Marek!  Yeah, I think I'm following you on there, actually.

And I've decided that I'm going to keep this chapter as part of this fanfic.  I'll update the link each time I add and rearrange chapters so the link in the post above will always lead directly to that chapter. smile

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#11 2018-01-03 09:15:41

The_Brony_Marek
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Registered: 2016-11-20
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Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Hey Blisa,

It's Marek again.

I just read your story (the previous post is actually from Mom, lol)

It's really heartbreaking to read after losing my father. My last words to him were actually very similar:

"You tried so hard, I'm so proud of you. I love you so much; goodbye, Dad"

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#12 2018-01-04 12:24:40

BlisaMarshmellow
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From: The State of Confusion
Registered: 2016-12-14
Posts: 541

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

Oh my cow xD  Well, I'm still pretty sure that I'm following you on there.

I'm sorry about your Dad.  I've been praying for you guys.  And I'm sorry that my story is so heartbreaking for you right now.  I hope you were able to enjoy it at least a tiny bit, though.

If you ever need to talk, feel free to message me sad <3

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#13 2018-04-09 10:48:15

warrior_Otter_maid
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Registered: 2018-03-21
Posts: 102

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

This story log is sad. You can tell they loved one another deeply and that he will be missed

I also think to play an evil bird would be cool but also birds on the side of good is cool as well

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#14 2018-04-12 15:09:13

BlisaMarshmellow
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From: The State of Confusion
Registered: 2016-12-14
Posts: 541

Re: DoraRose and Leon's last moments together! D:

I tried to make it as real (and, hence, as sad) as possible. 

An evil bird char would be great, probably, for the upcoming TP.  I would suggest asking Marek and Melantha about it.  And Ferravale needs some good blackbirds to be messengers.  You can Pmail Scioto, and me as Blisa, about it if it interests you smile

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